英语翻译In comparison with using traditional thermometer,holding this kind of thermometer in hand by touching the metal part with palm is a safer and more convenient way to take the body temperature,which also allows the direct observation of the

英语翻译In comparison with using traditional thermometer,holding this kind of thermometer in hand by touching the metal part with palm is a safer and more convenient way to take the body temperature,which also allows the direct observation of the
英语翻译
In comparison with using traditional thermometer,holding this kind of thermometer in hand by touching the metal part with palm is a safer and more convenient way to take the body temperature,which also allows the direct observation of the rise of temperature.
请帮忙把这段英语翻译成德语,务必使用正式的书面语言.

英语翻译In comparison with using traditional thermometer,holding this kind of thermometer in hand by touching the metal part with palm is a safer and more convenient way to take the body temperature,which also allows the direct observation of the
英文原句太长了,我在德语翻译里把它分成了两个句子：
Im Vergleich zu herkömmlichen Thermometern wird diese Art von Thermometern in den Händen gehalten und das Metallteil mit der Handfläche berührt.Auf diese Weise ist es sicherer und bequemer,die Körpertemperatur zu messen,zudem wird die direkte Beobachtung des Temperaturanstiegs ermöglicht.
翻译成中文就是：和传统的温度计相比之下,这种温度计被持在手中并且由手掌触摸金属部分.如此一来测量体温就更安全、更方便了,而且还可以直接观察体温的上升.
使用的都是写德语论文时的书面语言,