这几句话有没有语法错误?I am really hard working during the day, Mom's operation will be later on, because this days are too hot.My only best friend in this city asked me to go a trip for Shanghai EXPO during the day, but i am really sad to

这几句话有没有语法错误?I am really hard working during the day, Mom's operation will be later on, because this days are too hot.My only best friend in this city asked me to go a trip for Shanghai EXPO during the day, but i am really sad to
这几句话有没有语法错误?
I am really hard working during the day, Mom's operation will be later on, because this days are too hot.My only best friend in this city asked me to go a trip for Shanghai EXPO during the day, but i am really sad to said no to her. This girl and I had not been talk with each other for a long time , I am really happy that she talked to me and asked me again.But sometimes it's more hard than it seems to be.O(∩_∩)O~ I really want to go there to see Brasil Pavilion so that I can know more about you.It seems that Brasil Pavilion provide vistors Brazil barbecue for free.
Hope everything goes well with you.

这几句话有没有语法错误?I am really hard working during the day, Mom's operation will be later on, because this days are too hot.My only best friend in this city asked me to go a trip for Shanghai EXPO during the day, but i am really sad to
1during->all
2during the day->in this days
3but i am really sad to said no to her->but i say no to her which made me very upset.
4This girl and I had not been talk with each other for a long time ,I am really happy that she talked to me and asked me again->
my friend and i haven't got a chance to talk for a long time,she can invite me to come with her make me very happy.
5so that ->then
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I am really working hard during the day, Mom's operation will be several days later, because the weather is so hot in these days.My only best friend in this city has asked me to go on a trip to Shangh...

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I am really working hard during the day, Mom's operation will be several days later, because the weather is so hot in these days.My only best friend in this city has asked me to go on a trip to Shanghai EXPO during the day, i am really sorry to turn her down. we haven't talked with each other for a long time . I am really happy when she started talking to me and asking me to go out again.But sometimes it's much harder than it seems to be.O(∩_∩)O~ I really want to go there to see Brasil Pavilion so that I can know more about it.It seems that Brasil Pavilion provide vistors Brazil barbecue for free.

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