一篇英语短文改错,请帮忙改一下（10处错误）One afternoon becasue Chaplie was sitting togeter with his friends and talking ,a fly flew into a room and kept flying around ChPalie's head.Chaplie waved his hands to drive it away,but the

一篇英语短文改错,请帮忙改一下（10处错误）One afternoon becasue Chaplie was sitting togeter with his friends and talking ,a fly flew into a room and kept flying around ChPalie's head.Chaplie waved his hands to drive it away,but the
一篇英语短文改错,请帮忙改一下（10处错误）
One afternoon becasue Chaplie was sitting togeter with his friends and talking ,a fly flew into a room and kept flying around ChPalie's head.Chaplie waved his hands to drive it away,but the fly soon went back again.For once it even rested on his noses!Chaplie got angry,but he put something and hit it.however,the fly got away from in time.then the fly flew arund in the room for a few seconds ang finally it just rests onthe table in front of Chaplie.this time Chaplin thought he would surely kill it.After he looked at it careful,Chaplin gave up,said,"it isn'tthe same fly."

一篇英语短文改错,请帮忙改一下（10处错误）One afternoon becasue Chaplie was sitting togeter with his friends and talking ,a fly flew into a room and kept flying around ChPalie's head.Chaplie waved his hands to drive it away,but the
One afternoon 【when】Chaplie was sitting together with his friends and talking ,a fly flew into 【the】 room and kept flying around ChPalie's head.Chaplie waved his hands to drive it away,but the fly soon 【came】 back 【again删除】.For once it even rested on his 【nose】! Chaplie got angry,【and】 he 【took】 something and hit it.however,the fly got away 【删除from 】in time.then the fly flew arund in the room for a few seconds and finally it just 【rested】 on the table in front of Chaplie.this time Chaplin thought he would surely kill it.After he looked at it 【carefully】,Chaplin gave up,【saying】,"it isn't the same fly."好像还有错误,多于10处

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One afternoon becasue(改成when) Chaplie was sitting togeter with his friends and talking ,a fly flew into a（改成the） room and kept flying around ChPalie's head.Chaplie waved his hands to drive it away,but...

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One afternoon becasue(改成when) Chaplie was sitting togeter with his friends and talking ,a fly flew into a（改成the） room and kept flying around ChPalie's head.Chaplie waved his hands to drive it away,but the fly soon went（改成came） back again.For once it even rested on his noses（改成 nose）! Chaplie got angry,but（改成and）he put（改成took） something and hit it.however,the fly got away from （去掉）in time.then the fly flew arund in the room for a few seconds ang finally it just rests （改成rested ） on the table in front of Chaplie.this time Chaplin thought he would surely kill it.After he looked at it careful（改成carefully）,Chaplin gave up,（加上and）said,"it isn'tthe same fly."

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